Egyptian Good/Bad Essays

Here are links to both good Egyptian essays and examples of what not to write like. Please understand I am using these as examples, not so you can plagerize.

Good Essays:

http://nefertiti.iwebland.com/economy/ : an easier to understand essay but still with lots of interesting facts and complicated diagrams.

http://members.tripod.com/~sondmor/index-10.html : a much more advanced essay written by Morris Silver from the Economics Department of the City College of New York. This covers:
Egypt's Acquisition of Foreign Goods (and Labor-Power) Mainly in the Old Kingdom

The site here also has many more essays on ancient civilizations.

Bad Essays:

http://www.ccds.charlotte.nc.us/History/Egypt/04/haup/hauptfuhrer.htm

http://www.riverschool.org/students/work/culture.e.econ.htm

I classified these essays as bad essays because the points were obvious and the writer was boring, without a developed writing voice. For example the riverschool essay (which btw was written by a student) is titled: Ancient Egyptian Economy, and starts: There are many aspects to the Ancient Egyptian economy.

You understand what I mean by boring?

-Matt